Centaurs and Minotaurs
“I don’t understand…” Cristal stammered.
“You don’t understand this?” Dr. Roots asked as he pointed to the diagram on the board–a sort of ascending staircase of obstacles.
“This is what we’re suggesting. What do you see?” Doug asked, soothing his fiancée with a hand caress.
Cristal looked at the seven faces in the workshop. “You guys don’t understand my work!”
“Now don’t get defensive, we just want to understand your vision,” Dr. Roots put his hands up to calm her-–like she was about to explode.
Jameson rolled his eyes. “Don’t be that person…”
Alison snorted. “Like that woman that wore all that turquoise?”
“Cat poetry was banned the second she walked in the room.” Dr. Roots put his hand to his face.
“It’s not poetry! It’s a love story between minotaurs and centaurs…they are majestic beings!” Cristal burst a little too passionately.
“Granted, we just think the story could be simpler and the names not so complicated…”
“I used traditional Greek names…”
“Yes, yes. But it interrupts the flow,” Jameson noted. “Perhaps names that aren’t five syllables?”
Nods all around. “The plot is pulled directly from myths-–I don’t want to patronize my audience by spoon-feeding them.”
Dr. Roots nodded too. “We’re not asking you to. Have you considered stretching it out a bit? Making it a novella or
novel for example?”
Cristal beamed suddenly. “You think it could be a novel?”
“Totally!” Jameson said. “I dig it!”
More nods. “I guess I could play around with description and things like that.”
Dr. Roots let out a sigh and made a motion that meant ‘pass her your corrections’. “See we are looking to help you!”
“How often do you guys meet?”
“Weekly for a month, once a quarter,” Alison said. “It really helps; I feel I’ve come a long way.”
Dr. Roots nodded now. “Having a fresh pair of eyes is a fantastic and under-utilized tool.”
Cristal leafed through colorfully corrected pages-–some with a lot of notes, some with few. It was more than she initially
expected. “Yes, I understand now.”
Romana Guillotte has an MFA in Writing for Dramatic Media from the UNLV, where she also received a BA in Film Studies and a BA in English. Though more importantly is a terribly average cellist and is a ginger that loves dragons. She’s had short fiction appear in “Foliate Oak Literary Magazine”, “Slink Chunk Press”, and “The J.J. Outré Review”